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Charlie appreciation post. He's so sweet i'm getting cavities.

<3 I must admit (again) that I am baffled how much people like Charlie. Ain't complaining, just surprised

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Oh, one of my reads in dashing. You still planning to update there?

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Of course. Life hasn't been kind to me the past year, so I didn't had much time/mind to write. But I'm working on it. It will be updated on dashing and here, and there should be a writing stream soon (check the dev blog for info) :)

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oook.. straight off the bat , i love this shit & hope you can continue but uh yea was really a hidden gem to find tbh. 

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<3 sorry it's been almost a year since a proper update. Live really got in the way Dx I'm trying to have ch7 out before the end of the year, and also move from twine's harlowe to sugarcube to make it look nicer

Noooooooooooooooo I can't wait for the full version. I finished it so far and I love all the options the player gets, especially getting to befriend all sorts of characters.

<3 I'm trying my best to get the next few chapters out, but life is being a mess. So, be patient please ^^; sorry

This current chapter ending has reawaken my odd love for bad stuff happening to mcs, especially customizable ones

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oh dear D= well, at the risk of disappointing you... they'll be fine-ish....

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I'd never be disappointed by that, I take what I can get

So far I'm really really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see how it will progress, hope to see soon  more of this  mysterious bounty-hunter

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you will. preacher's an RO

Hell yeah, You had my curiosity now you have my attention

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Hello! I'm not sure if you're aware of this bug/whatever it is or not so I apologize if you already are, but I got this pop-up when I selected 'Comfort Florence' in Chapter 5, I believe! :]] 

This is strange. I can't reproduce the error, and all of the code looks to be in order.

Could you click on 'error' and screenshot that?

sorry for the late reply, but here you go! :] I also found another one of them in chapter 6.

Thank you. I still can't reproduce the error. Did you start from scratch/cleared your cache or is this a loaded save?

It's a loaded save.

That might be the culprit then. the variable is a new one, so maybe the save got corrupted due to that. Sorry.

As someone who usually reads on mobile, is there a way to save and load to disk like other twine games? Sometimes the twine stored save reset even when i don't close the browser

Unfortunately I don't know. I'm pretty new to twine coding. There IS a version of the game in Choicescript over on dashingdon however, that should provide better saves for mobile gaming.

yep, it seems like i don't lose the save even if i close the browser, thanks!

the itchio and dashingdon versions are identical except for a few phrasings here and there due to how the coding/structuring works. When the game is fully released I should have sorted out the missing saves :3

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I noticed that I am unable to put in a custom first and last name. Either way I love the story!

Mhnn... I checked on several browers now and it works on my end. When you click the '...' at the options, you need to select and mark the input field, deleted the 'your name please' and enter your own. Was that maybe the problem?

Ill try it out and see! Thank you!

Let me know if it works. Also, don't worry for the name not immediately showing up in the stats then, it's set to only appear there once you also set what Charlie calls you nickname-wise due to how the stats will show the full name.

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... I did not expect to love this as much as I did... I was set on trying it out because the "summary" intrigued me. But I ended up absolutely LOVING IT! I haven't even met the whole cast of characters and I am already hooked! There's just something about his game... The flow? The narrative? The plot maybe? Idk but I am DEFINITELY following this through to the end. Also, the chapters I've read so far have been really engaging. I couldn't wait to find out what was next every time I reached the end of a chapter. Looking forward to seeing more! You did great!

<3 thank you, this means a lot. I must admit I am currently a bit in a writing slump, but I'm getting there with the next chapter :3

No worries! Please take your time!

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AHHHHHH the end I can't-. Amazing story! I love the found family dynamics between all the characters, and for the life of me I can't seem to just pick a love interest! XD Very well written and keeps you on the edge of your seat. Plus, the accents make the story seem much more authentic. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! 

:D thank you.

Also, there's still a few ROs to be introduced...

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Imma be real. This is amazing to play! I love the dynamic between the mc and Charlie and everyone else. The writing is amazing!

I can not wait for more!

Why does the mc have an accent?

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It's influence from the people they grew up with/spend most of their time with. :)

Just a small bug I found in the prologue 

When you are picking Mr, Mx, Miss, ect.
Once you click on Mx it takes you to Mr is correct

Could you screenshot the bug? It's a bit har to find. 

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edit: I think I found it. I'll fix it with the next update. Thank you :D

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omg i love your story and the characters are all charming. i cant wait for the next chapter. feed me all the angst plssss i wanna see my mc suffer jdjssdfggf sorry

you. i like how you think >:D

Genuinely such a game! I couldn't put it down until I reached the end of the written content. Thanks so much for making this! Your writing is just so goood

So far this has been the best reading and choice game I've ever played. Thanks for making this game. Does anyone know how to remove the thing in the corner by any chance?

It happens when i press load :(

huh, that is the debug overview. it should only pop up if there's a bug in the code. if you restart from scratch and it pops up, could you screenshot the tab on it saying 'Errors'?

addendum: On chrome your safety settings might prevent saving/loading the game. I'm looking into what causes it, as it works fine on firefox or edge.

Oh okay, it's gone now thank you!

Sometimes it might be the cache when new variables are added or altered. Only if the errors persist the mistake is in the code.

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dashingdon.com is updated with Ch. 6 but itch.io here only has content up until Ch. 5? Thanks for the immersive game experience, great time playing ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿฝ

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Porting takes a while :) but it's a good thing as I found a ton of bugs in ch6 >>

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oh my goodness i have been obsessed with this since it was first posted on cog forums i am LOVING the jump to twine it suits this story so well

i know there's not much new story content from where the cog demo left off but it felt like a whole new story and also like coming home ๐Ÿฅฐ

looking forward to future updates!! xoxo

:D There's a few small details that were changed added for this, maybe you can spot them :)

(Also there's some small bugs now >_> but I'm fixing them when uploading ch6)

i did spot some actually but until now thought i was just misremembering ๐Ÿ˜„ i played the cog demos obsessively as they updated

you got two things i love. one, realistically diverse westerns, and two, the supernatural ๐Ÿ’•

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ps. am now following the dev blog on tumblr so i shall be prepared when you update my evil plan to shower your writing with affection is working ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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that is what keeps us writers going :D (that and spite)